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firecrakker
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since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia

0 posted 2000-11-30 11:26 AM



Bottles, Tubes, and Compacts
scattered on the vanity
Vanity
of my Life

A cylinder of red
painted Jezebel lips
Enticing
unsuspecting prey

Greasy white, Blue ball nose
brought enchanted laughter
Antics
of silliness

Vials of saline
shed crocodile tears
Sorrow
for naught

Mirror, Mirror
reflecting your empty grin
An empty canvas...
Who shall I be today?


Sheila  


[This message has been edited by firecrakker (edited 11-30-2000).]

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Victoria
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

1 posted 2000-11-30 03:40 PM


I love this Sheila..reminds me of my dresser..ha...good one..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
2 posted 2000-12-01 01:10 AM


Wow, I really like this!  Hey, I hope you haven't forgot about me    I normally don't read many in here, but I felt drawn to this one.  Would like to talk about it some time!!!

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-12-01 03:24 PM


Shelia....I just love reading your postings.  This one has such deep meaning.  "Who shall I be today?"  Aren't we all remaking ourselves each day to accommodate people, places, things in our lives?  Very well done.  Hardrock
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2000-12-02 12:12 PM


Wow great poem, short & powerful & so true. we hide under masks & wonder why we cant be loved for the real us   LOVE ELMO
catalinamoon
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Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-12-02 04:58 PM


Who am I today? Always a good question. I like this a lot, Sheila.
Sandra

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
6 posted 2000-12-02 09:35 PM


It's almost easier that way. To dress up and pretend to be someone you're not. That way you can act however you want and look like you wouldn't and it's like, hmmm. It's like you don't have to be cautious of being YOU!

Joy

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