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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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My veins grow empty My heart becomes weak Loneliness is killing me Its the love I seek Crying through the nights Sighing throughout the day I cant hear you speaking No matter what you say For the silence has taken hold The darkness has taken its toll I no longer see the light I no longer have a soul |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Oh Dear! I wish I could help. But I know that no one really can. But dont be downcast. Here is a quatrain I wrote to bring you some hope and maybe some cheer THERE IS A RISING STAR Open thy eye for there is still a rising star Somewhere below the vast horizon afar And some day it shall rise in all its glory To banish the darkness that thy way does mar Deepak Menon |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Loneliness is cleanlyness and cleanlyness is godlyness and god is empty, just like me... (Ok, so its from a smashing punkins song!) Loneliness is not a burden anyone should bear, but unfortunatly we all do. Before i moved last summer, i had a close (abiet small) circle of friends that i was very comfortable with, i was going out with the girl of my dreams. Then one day, just like that, it was all gone. From heaven to hell in approx. 4 hours...thats gotta be somesort of record. So the moral, even in loneliness, you are not alone...not here atleast. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Dark_Kisses, Great to see more of your poetry! This one really describes my pathetic life. Great job and hope to see more  |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes this is as always wonderful work i just love the way you write and the feelings that you put in to it. keep it up.. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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