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Born to Cry
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Born to Cry |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Born to Cry Born to cry To live this wasted life Then to die, never knowing why To wander alone Seeking solace and comfort In the darkness, a chance to atone To love from afar Never to taste loves sweet fire Consumed with pain, heart to know only scars "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow...I guess you know you've written my story as well...but methinks, in my case, it may be a cry to be born, yes? Let's hope so. This one deserves a hug. Thanks. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Great message in so little words. I guess that goes to show that it doesn't take a mountain of words to get one's point accross. Well done EagleOne.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
EagleOne, You have this natural talent for speaking volumes in few words and reading my heart with uncanny precision. Another great one! Thanks for the excellent read.. Sheila |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I liked this EagleOne : Such a story in so few sentences... take care. ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
EagleOne, Can we cry together? *HuGS* Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sir, you've been reading my diary! Superb! |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
what is thast old saying Loniness just leave me alone. You say so much in such few words. |
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Dream Chaser Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 32South Carolina |
Oh man! Have you ever captured my existance. I've cried many tears in the last year and experienced so much pain. Great poem! Angel |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
serenity......A "cry to be born" yes perhaps that is indeed the way to look at it. Best be careful with the hugs, people may start to talk,  but then they will talk anyway so I might as well accept the hugs, eh! Thanks, I always appreciate your comments!G.A.......I think it's just that sometimes I don't have alot to say. Thanks for the well done!Sheila......I just write what's in my heart, kind of scary that so many seem to know those feelings so well. Thanks for stopping in to comment. Tara.......Thankyou just doesn't seem to be enough, but I do thank you. Kethry.......yes we can, I will continue to write, and heal. Thanks! Poet deVine..I consider a "superb" from you to be very special indeed. KitKat.........I hadn't heard that but it seems appropriate. Thanks! Angel......Tears and pain are things we all understand here! I hope that yours will ease for you soon, take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Sometimes it really does feel this way to me, like i was born to do this and to be alone. very good i liked it "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
a brief piece voicing deep pain, ah, I could feel that pain. good read. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
May I join the club, I'm in the mood to spend some tears too.... excellent write, Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a shame when the heart is full of passion and love..and not have that special person to share it with...nicely written Eddie.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
the yearning expressed pulls at the heartstrings...nicely done... -Tier |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
i think we all feel like this some times i know i have. But we are also born smilling, and that may be more of a strugle but worth it. grate pome |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ginners....it can be a hollow feeling that we share. Glad you enjoyed! dragonpoe.....sometimes I feel the pain flows too easily. Charisma.......You know that you are always welcome, though I think it better to share a smile rather than tears. Victoria.......Yes that is it! You always seem to know the feeling exactly! Tiersdin.... A yearning!, yes it is that, thankyou for adding your thoughts. raleighbttrfly......well I've heard said that life is what we make of it, and I think that, for the most part, I agree. Thanks. < !signature--> "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You always have a lot to say...you just say it so well you dont need lots of words to do it...HUGS my friend Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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