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marcos New Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 8 |
The fire roars inside Screaming "Feed me" "Give me more" I do Even though I know The tiny shreds I'm providing Will only give it a short time to burn But its flames You should see its flames Charging Like a thousand warriors in combat All fighting All at once They're so real So me Powerful Immense Grand Invulnerable I'm anyone i want to be I'm a millionaire A Don Juan A James Bond A Charles Bukowski An Everest climber Even a president And when the flames start to flicker I realize I would last much longer If I built a proper fire for myself Stoked it Prodded it Gave it time to heat up And grow inside I realize that But how would I keep warm? |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
"I'm anyone I want to be" What a great line! A blazing way to make your debut at Passions....Welcome and I hope to see much more posted from you. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions! Please excuse my late arrival on the welcoming wagon.  Great piece. Keep the pen moving (so to speak)  DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Impressive style and content. I'm glad that you, like so many here, aren't afraid to tackle a major internal problem through verse. That's always been a major method for me to fight big problems. Welcome to Passions. Hope you enjoy your stay, and keep up the good work! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Welcome to Passions!!!! I hope you find a family here. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Marcos...I agree, very nice first post. Well done. For a similar, but slightly different slant on this, go read my poem "White Powder"...you might find it interesting. Hardrock |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Welcome to DP Marcos Tremendous piece! I too love the line "I'm anyone I want to be" Take care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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