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Caverns of her Heart
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Caverns of her Heart |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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In the shadow stricken night moonlight hair flows over the cold shoulder of darkness like a bat she set him free from the caves of romance now only haunted by whispers and the gasping echo of his voice within their souls were the thrills of pleasure and seduction now she sleeps alone within the caverns of her heart she still feels the moisture of his lips upon hers..and his breath whispering in the auburn of her hair In the twilight the billowing of the wind claws against her windowpane and again..she thinks of him A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I like this VERY much!! Dark but sensual, great imagery and a wonderful feel to it.  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much for peeking in DP..appreciate your comments today ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Victoria, you did it again..I have been too busy to read or write lately, glad I stopped in and found this. You do love lost so perfectly. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sandra..miss you..have a great thanksgiving..ill be in vegas..wish me luck ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"the caves of romance". Very nice...giving me chills and thrills...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thrills and chills are nice james.. thank you for taking time to read today.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Such exquisite imagery, you constantly leaves me in awe! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Eddie..so nice of you to say..inspires me to keep writing.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Victoria...Excellent work here. Great imagery, palpable emotions. But you always turn in a sterling performance, as they say in showbiz. Hardrock |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
well, you are just too kind Hardrock...thank you for peeking in.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
"and again..she thinks of him" Loved this Victoria! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you tara..nice to hear from you.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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