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Dark Poetry #2

music to my loneliness

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2000-11-14 05:25 AM

i fell in love with a liar
choosing to believe in his prayer
hoping my love would make it right
it only turned into fright

my mind is so soaked in his speeches
that i forgot reality teaches
not to sin no more
for life implore
for me to stop believing a lie
i cry
too often
to forget
the momentum
of his drum
calling me evil
to desire his will

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-11-15 09:43 AM

Oh wow!!!!! My ex husband was like that too

He only wanted to see me fail but I thought he wanted me to succeed. Very nice display of emotions here. Liked it

DkW

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-11-16 01:19 AM

Great piece. It got me thinking.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

3 posted 2000-11-16 10:30 AM

Sometimes I wonder if hope is such a good thing to have. Ah, my friend, I, too, can relate with this one, remember you are not alone

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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