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The Cycle |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
So you think you're in love,can you tell me what that means? So he treats you like a queen, can you tell me what thats like? So you'll be together forever, does that knowledge fill you with happiness? So you broke-up, does it hurt? What hurts more: your heart or your pride? So you cried for weeks, does it help any? So you met someone new, and you think you're in love. Do you see a cycle? I do. |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Yeah I see the cycle, but if you don't move on to new loves you will always be alone, so its something that we just have to do and hope we pick a good one, I should practise what I preach... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
as i reply to more of your work i'm slowly becoming a fan and i hope you enjoy it so because you are a great writer an di hope you keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Well the carnival ride has stoped for me here kid. no matter what this is it. I think? hahaha Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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