Dark Poetry #2 |
Let Me ..In The Morning |
Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Let me bring my heart and park it in front of your house in the morning. Under a tree it can silently wait for the day near you, Until you give it life. Let me take your pain and drive it to the edge of the Palisades in the morning. With eternal glee,give it one good push let it beg let it scream. And let it be gone. Let me grasp your shell and melt it down to the core in the morning. Leaving only the sweetest part your heart dearest heart To be given to me. Let me take your fear and wash it away with the tide in the morning. Creating for us a brave new world come to me I'll run to you Overflowing with love. Let me hold your face and kiss it tenderly,my love,each morning. Love me,dear,and hold me close lean on me feel my love Until the end of time. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
SIGH.... Such love, to have it, to hold it forever. And the metaphors you used here are very creative. Great writing. Sandra |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Oh man, why can't every guy find a woman like this? Though a tad choppy it wasn't hard to follow at all. I enjoyed this greatly. Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I must say I loved reading this poem...James |
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