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Broken_Heart
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-11-10 12:33 PM


The Passing On
I wake up bathing in sweat
Still screaming from the fright
In my dreams you're still haunting
After you left that lonely night

I remember holding you tight
Keeping you close to my heart
Yet never should I have known
That we would be ripped apart

I cannot breathe anymore
Since that faithful day
That you were taken from me
When you passed away

I will always think of you
I will always remember
I will always Love you
I will always know
That the night you passed on
Was the night you became free...



Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...


© Copyright 2000 Jean Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-11-10 12:48 PM


very good poem  .Losing someone is a hard thing to write about. You  did a  good job
Suzanne

firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
2 posted 2000-11-10 04:08 PM


You've done a beautiful job with a difficult topic. I enjoy the acceptance at the end.

Well done.

Sheila

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