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A Passion Play
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A Passion Play |
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PoetryNest Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 46Orlando, FL. 32703 |
Lights dim as her voice thunders, A Passion Play Swine! Thy crusty hooves shan’t score debate Rise elements of fire! Platinum flames be as feathers adorning my body Sear his limp member, no longer to offend me! And in my heated presence Feel the passion lost to thine own breast For it’s cavity holds no heart Only dark murk wherein ignorance resides Thou art a little man, beset by unknown forces Forces of which ye hath no knowledge Blind to the power of She! She who dawns creation She who commands all existence She who extends, mind-walking galaxies As ye play with thy flute. Silence fool ! Thy mockingbird tongue hath no power! Thy mind be that of a simple fool staggering amid night’s garden falling, full weight upon my thorns Thy foul blood sickens this soil backwashing thy venomous flow bordering thine impish body Open thine eyes! Feel my presence loom as thou slithereth upon my ground Make hast taking thy leave! lest ye fall pray to ~A Passion Play~ Cynthia (A Dove) Proctor [img]http://www.geocities.com/a_dove2000/cin1997.gif[/img] |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This is wonderful!!  Loved your word usage... the images it created... the wonderful undertones! Thanks for sharing! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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PoetryNest Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 46Orlando, FL. 32703 |
Thank you, Tara. I'm so happy you enjoyed. I had a blast writing this. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was great. It hit the spot during this late night pain fest im experiencing.....my back hurts. Got my mind off that  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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PoetryNest Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 46Orlando, FL. 32703 |
First time I've heard of applying satire to an ailment ! Glad it served a 'noble purpose'. *LOL* Thanks for reading and responding. Might want to try some heat on the back too.  Cynthia (A Dove) Proctor |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
I am speechless at the directions my mind went reading this!! Appropriately titled and wonderfully written.. I love it! Sheila |
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PoetryNest Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 46Orlando, FL. 32703 |
Hi firecrakker. Nice to meet you. Thanks !Cynthia (A Dove) Proctor |
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