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Night Chica
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 39
Vermont

0 posted 2000-11-07 06:07 PM


Gone and Nothing More

Just and object,
Just a toy;
Nothing to
This new boy.

Hot and tempting
Sultry smile;
Nothing that will
Last a while.

Flesh exposed
Hands explore
Hormone driven;
Nothing more.

Secret motives
Disguised charm
Just to get me
On your arm.

Physical wanting
Loveless fun
Pretending only
To find you're

Gone.  

© Copyright 2000 Megan Jones - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-11-07 06:37 PM


Wow, you said it! Very powerful poem. Sorry you have to feel this pain. Its miserable, isn't it?
Take care.  I did one entitled "Gone" recently. Seems there are a lot of us in this same space.
Sandra  

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-11-07 06:52 PM


I enjoyed your read, although not your experience. sometimes we are naive when it comes to the heart, and we are easily deceived by those who wish just to play games.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-11-07 08:01 PM


That's one of the unfortunate sides of humanity...

It's hard when you have to learn about it...

hugs

K

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2000-11-08 12:44 PM


Wow.....this was a great read. I liked this a lot. Pretty sad situation that had to occur though. I do hope you are ok.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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