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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-11-05 12:46 PM


I look into the mirror
Each and every day
I never seem to like
The vision in the way
I try to see more
Maybe something I forgot
But the sight is all clear
Its something I have fought
So I listen to my voice
And hear the silent cry
No one seems to hear me
Even with a gallant try
So I speak up even louder
Praying to win this fight
The fight within myself
The tears roll as this I write
I wish someone could understand
The person behind this mask
Wanting to walk beside them
Its not a horrible task
Yet today there are no smiles
Just like all the days before
My heart has been broken
All scared and torn
Somedays I cant seem to breathe
I gasp with all my might
Please just take the pain away
This war is too difficult to fight
Cause many years have passed
And the pain is still here
The memories have not yet died
My body still trembles in fear
So what I ask of you this day
Is to take my hand in yours
Walk me through the painful path
As you open up the doors
Help me become
The person I want to be
Take away my dark mask
And light the hallway to see
Show me the stars
Let me feel the lasting love
Unbound my body
Let me soar like a dove




No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2000-11-05 01:13 AM


Masques - a subject after my own demented heart - sigh - this bleeds pain and longing.

Chris

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-11-05 01:19 AM


Why must we all be in so much pain?
Oh right......dark passions......doh! *hits himself on the head*

Good poem......very painful though....keep that head up...and arms and legs up.....it's good for circulation....i think...erm...or not.... don't quote me on that.




"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-11-05 01:27 AM


Christopher ... ummmmm thanx maybe?    

And "Dopey"  ... thanx for your comment.  But no DP doesnt always mean pain and sorrow.  Its a way of life to some.  As for the circulation thing.... ummm okay   !!  And also dont worry I never give up!


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

4 posted 2000-11-05 05:38 PM


Such a painful cry you pen. Just keep on going forward. There are brighter days ahead, and soon you will soar like the dove you wish upon

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
5 posted 2000-11-06 02:34 AM


Wow...befuddled, bewildered, and for some reason, I feel alone after reading this.

Jerm

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2000-11-06 01:05 PM


My friend, memories never die, or they were not worth remembering.  Memories grow you, and mold you into the person you are today. Painful as they sometimes are, they hurt only because we allow them to.  They're the past, and once accepted as that, relinquish their pain and become an important part of our life.  Accept them for the past they are and enjoy the beauty they gave while they lived.

Mirrors are simply reflectors. They reflect not only the physical you, but what you are inside. And what you are inside is going to relect in the mirror as the physical you.  Smile your beautiful smile inside, feel the love and warmth you had, yet accept it for the past it is, and look forward to things to come, as they will, in their, and your, time, but not before you allow them to.

One cannot live IN the past, but has to live
WITH the past. One has to live in the present, with one's dreams of the future, while letting the past help guide their way.

Gee...got pretty wordy here so gonna go...

jwesley

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