Dark Poetry #2 |
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Lady In Waiting! |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest ![]() |
Lady In Waiting Lady robed in scarlet attire Full of the nights heated desire Longing the touch of her knight The light is darkened from her sight She longs intensely for his breath Against her skin so soft, so scandalous He is gone now from her searching view She wrestles deep impulses from within These demons, she has come to know as friends Her heart is pounding faster than light For her lover is all she wants tonight Passion so unbridled and so divine to share She feels as though these demons do not care They surely now have her soul and mind So she wrestles with her sultry dreams Her knight was not all he seemed? To the wind she sings a mournful song As her lover was to all she belonged Come quickly she whispers Yet only to herself Or tonight this lady in waiting Will....... Simply be once again put on a shelf! [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
oooohh...you got me with the ending...thought for sure the knight would gallop in...Good one. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great work. You are a passioante one. I enjoyed every word. ![]() Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ok, push over, make room for me on that shelf. I know the same man, its hard, isn't it? Awesome poem, I really like the theme. Mayhap our knight will yet find us.. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope your knight is soon on the way to fulfill that longing...James |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
OMG, this completely mezmorized me ![]() wow, Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
OMG, this completely mezmorized me ![]() wow, Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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