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LM
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0 posted 2000-11-01 04:40 PM



Not the master

I am no master of my faith
No matter what I choose
Life has it's will and finds a way
To order me and I obey.
Predictibly - I loose.

I learn too little much too late
And time will tell again,
But not the words I wish to hear,
An evil whisper in my ear -
"You've planned your life in vain".


"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-11-01 06:19 PM


Another true story, I think. There's an old saying about life being what happens while you're making plans. I know all my plans that I made for almost a year, were all in vain. It does seem like fate has it's way, whatever we do. But I am feeling a bit fatalistic lately.
I think we need to keep trying to take back the control, anyway.
Love this.
Sandra

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2 posted 2000-11-02 01:14 AM


Great poem. It speaks to me beyond anything I have read from you before.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



LM
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3 posted 2000-11-02 10:05 AM


Catalinamoon and Xeonox, thank you so much for the replies. Yes, indeed as I look back at my life, especially the last few years, everything I thought would happen (well, almost everything) exactly the opposite has happened. Not that everything was bad, but stilol not at all as I thought it would be.
Take Care guys!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
4 posted 2000-11-02 10:18 AM


Yes very nicely put here.  Geesh if I could get back everything I actually wanted outta life, I would be one happy person. Yet things dont happen that way.  Well at least for me.
Nice work here,
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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