»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #2
»
Justice for the Unjust
| Dark Poetry #2 |
|
Justice for the Unjust |
|
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
|
Soulless vessel you call body, Blackened muscle you call heart, Life's values merely pipe dreams, I should've let Solan have you from the start. But I gave you the benefit of the doubt, Believed your pleas to the Gods, All along you were in league with Hera, Should've known to her you'd relate. What you believe and what you are, Are nothing yet one and the same, Hera herself has turned her back, And she too shudders when she hears your name. Deplorable being spawn from hell, Wretched chasm you call soul, Paltry natured abomination, It's time for Isis and Solan to take control. This one will be for Solan, How he likes to sink his teeth in, Let him have you and tear you limb from limb, For there is nothing worth saving within. Scurvy of the human form, Pathetic excuse of a man, No redemption, no saviour for you, I watch the face of evil grin. Solan will send you back, Back from whence you came, And only then will the world be cleansed, A curse you mutter? It won't hold true for mankind has forgotten your name. We send you into the inferno, Perhaps hells fires will destroy your rot, Imps prodding with poisened spears, Karma rules, justice is what you got. [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 06-25-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~WooHoo Isis,...this poems just screams strength....and power in it's text. It's the kind of poem that while reading it...you get all worked up and you start reading it like it's coming from you....so you get all into it...ok I am rambling, but I think this is awesome...so I can't help but explain to you what it made me feel like. Hehe. Great job. Take care. *Peace. |
||
|
kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i see large amounts of anger here. a spirit held down that refuses to be held anymore!! on solan!! on isis!!! hear hear!! more power to ya!! wonderful wonderful work isis. loved it!!!!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks guys glad you liked it!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
||
|
Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Right on, Xena....uh, I mean, Isis. No book submission on this? It certainly qualifies...at least in MY book. Hardrock |
||
|
Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I'll sink my teeth in so far, let his life drain between my jaws holding his heart digging deep within his cavity, while standing upon his lifeless body with my paws. Scattering his limbs and headless torso to the four corners of time no chance to redeem himself into his heart a stake of pine. Challenge my friend and love in life to all that can see To my Isis your call and challenge maybe all you can see but beware it is a challenge to the we. love you kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you Isis... With you and Solan guarding. . . the unjust have much to fear. . . very powerful my friend. . . just what I needed to see!!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes unjust ones beware isis is on our team. great work here loved it as i do all your work. It's a bird, It's a plane, No It's superIsis I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
||
|
taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! You have such a great style Isis Loved this!!! |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Super Isis? I don't know about that but I'm glad everyone liked my bit of fantasy Joel talk to me whatever do you mean hon?? LOL I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
