Dark Poetry #2 |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA ![]() |
Summon the devil Offer him your soul In return you will never grow old Make a ban with the dark knight And he will protect your evil right See through my eyes And see no more cries My soul was the prize That I paid to the knight Join me in the bid And prepare to lead Your very new creed Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Ah you are a dark one indeed X, but write with a light of brilliancy. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I wrote this one of the top of my head in like 2 minutes that is why it does not reflect my dark talent. ![]() Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ooh, makes it sound kind of appealing.. I would say it definitely refelcts your talent, especially if it came out in 2 minutes. ![]() Sandra |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I liked this one. A good poem about temptation. |
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