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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-31 04:37 PM


Summon the devil
Offer him your soul
In return you will never grow old

Make a ban with the dark knight
And he will protect your evil right

See through my eyes
And see no more cries
My soul was the prize
That I paid to the knight

Join me in the bid
And prepare to lead
Your very new creed  



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 2000-10-31 07:11 PM


Ah you are a dark one indeed X, but write with a light of brilliancy.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Xeonox
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2 posted 2000-11-01 11:19 AM


I wrote this one of the top of my head in like 2 minutes that is why it does not reflect my dark talent.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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3 posted 2000-11-01 06:39 PM


Ooh, makes it sound kind of appealing..
I would say it definitely refelcts your talent, especially if it came out in 2 minutes.  
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4 posted 2000-11-02 12:21 PM


I liked this one.  A good poem about temptation.
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