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Dying I am
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Dying I am |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
dying in sin dying in hate dying in you dying I am dying right now dying for you dying this night dying in cold dying I am sink in black earth as my grave encloses my eyes spread open dying I am All of my life Where have you been I wonder if I'll Ever see you again ~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
this is powerfully dark. sending haunting images of dying in love. beautifully done. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Point made! Enjoyed the read. jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cheer up, now, or I will have to write a big long letter of consolation, and I am too darn depressed myself. I sure do know the feeling, and you expressed it very powerfully here. Sandra |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Yes cheer up hon, I'll pass on one teeny piece of wisdom I too have learnt, hating kills the hater inch by inch..... Hope all is well for you soon... Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Vs, wow. My emotions seem to be on a rollercoaster ride, I'll post another reply when it stops, but I love this. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Wow...great to see you here again...liked it a lot...hope you feel better.. darkstar |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
It is a shame that we do our best writing when we are feeling our worst. This is great work here, short, subtle, chilling, and to the point. As demented as this may sound, I enjoyed reading this one  Great work.Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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