Dark Poetry #2 |
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amose New Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 1 |
The caring in your eyes, Your warm, gentle smile, Your passionate kisses, The way you look at me, The way you touch me, The way you say my name, The feelings I get when you hold my hand, The happiness you bring me, You make me feel beautiful inside and out. I don't want these memonts to end. I never want to forget them. I never thought I would have someone who loves me. I never thought I would find such happiness. I never thought I would find you. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Get Hallmark Cards on the phone....I think we have a winner. Good show Amose.....welcome to Dark Passions. Really nice work. Glad you have someone in your life...and shared it with us. Hardrock |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
BEAUTIFUL! Thats all i really need to say. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to dark passions, what lovely work this is, I too can see it on a card! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Finally I can say I don't relate to someones poem, but it sure is good to know that its just around the corner for me. Thanks for showing me the possitives of love. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
well, maybe tomorrow i will start looking again... you have inspired me!! welcome to passions!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions! Great first post. Love can be positive, thanx for reminding me Peace |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes yes welcome welcome come one come all to the greatest places on the internet. well great first post i just can't wait to read more i love it. keep them coming. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
What a beautiful tender poem WELCOME! "The happiness you bring me, You make me feel beautiful inside and out." Very touching. Look forward to reading more of your poetry! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aawww,....this is awesome!!! So glad you found it. Wonderful heart happy poem. Thank you for making my heart smile. Welcome here!!! Take care. *Peace. |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Lucid and True - You write from your heart my friend Deepak Menon |
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