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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Watch as she, exumes the grave. unmarked... where my heart, is laid, out in state. No dignity in death or its final state. Please don't, it's too late. An ember still smolders... Hope does not leave as in the tomb it awaits until... it is forced to burn, once more a flame Who are you, to disrespect? my self imposed grief. Click |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
That was a real good read. I actually read it twice to absorbe it all.  Suzanne |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Damn fine read here... Hope does not leave as in the tomb it awaits until... it is forced to burn, like that in particular... K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this is awesome. Truly enjoyed this, very strong image, and I have to agree with all the words. Take care. Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I agree with sven...those same words are captivating, all of it is. Ron |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i also agree that this was a lovely read, as well as a very interesting way of describing this situation. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This one click's so well...James |
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