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silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

0 posted 2000-10-23 12:31 PM

the words i tried so hard to find
are slipping through a mindless hole
at the bottom of your coffee
and every drop is another stroke of the moment
leaning towards your heart
like a poor lost soul
in fear that i have mistaken you for myself.

[This message has been edited by silentsky (edited 10-23-2000).]

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 2000-10-23 12:34 PM

I don't know how much you intended with this - But I can read several nuances not at first immediate - I think this can be read over and over, finding something different each time. The potential depth is striking.

Christopher

ps: looks like a typo on "lossed" - should be lost... lol - I do that sometimes too!

ilph
Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 78

2 posted 2000-10-28 05:57 AM

dear shira

rereading this with the subject known humbles me.

i can see me in this..and you..simultaneously. i guess that means its a good poem. and somewhat confronting.

josh

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-28 10:29 PM

you can also read between the lines. more goes on here than we can see. very interesting write.

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

4 posted 2000-10-29 01:54 AM

So much more is said in silence. The abruptness of this poem makes it so infecting. Loved it.

Much love all,
Krissie

~*Those words...
Oh, how I long to hear
...those words
Tell me...*~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2000-10-29 04:01 AM

Shira,
spinning is good, so is weaving, knitting and other crafts.

Seriously though a very reflective poem I liked it. It's good that you're still here.
Be well
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

6 posted 2000-10-30 11:37 AM

I am truly bewildered and befuddled. More please

Jerm

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

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