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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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0 posted 2000-10-22 08:10 PM


Saturday night,
A wedding to attend,
My soul knew only lonliness,
The happy couple seeking beginnings, was I at the doorway of my end?

Didn't feel festive,
Though I was happy for them both,
Our ship steaming up the river,
All I saw was dark forbidding waters longing for my souls' betrothed.

Not to stay down for long,
I sought to lift the emotional bondage,
I went and introduced myself to the entertainer of the night,
And paid him his dues and homage.

I asked if I could sing with him,
For nothing but the love of music,
He saw in me the fellow traveller,
He would let me and give me full credit.

To again hold that microphone,
To sing my soul's tunes publicly,
Soon washed away the threatening darkness,
There is NO happier place I could be.

I even got to sing some inspirational songs I love,
Had the whole boat rocking and dancing,
My gifts sent from above,
I was back with a vengence and a happy ending.

I was again reminded of all that I am,
All that I am capable of being and doing,
My light was shining for all to see,
Twas the end of the beginnings of my undoing.

All too soon the night was over,
Back to the mortal realm I stole again,
But now for months on end I'll be reminded,
Of that magic we wove together back then.

A lesson learned and I hope you shall heed it too,
Find those magical gifts within yourself,
Share them, revell in the gifts you were bestowed,
And that can be your inspiration, a reminder of your better self.

It will cleanse your soul of darkness,
Steer you back towards your light,
Give you the courage to face life's obstacles,
And teach you not to fear the darkness of night.


*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-10-22 09:31 PM


Isis, this is great. Inspirational.
My favorite line, I have to quote:
"Twas the end of the beginnings of
my undoing"
Too perfect.
Sandra

firecrakker
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since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
2 posted 2000-10-22 11:14 PM


Isis,
This is sooooo great. And aptly titled! It is wonderful to see the self emerge stronger and better from a cocoon of bitterness and heartache. I love to see a person, especially a woman, find herself, her inner strength, and her self worth through the unique gifts she's been given.  Well spoken!
Crakker

[This message has been edited by firecrakker (edited 10-22-2000).]

Sven
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3 posted 2000-10-23 07:58 PM


Isis, you know that I wish that I could have been there. . .

Just wonderful my friend. . . nothing like being in your element to make you feel better!!!  



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-10-23 08:07 PM


Thanks my friends it was a light coming on after years of darkness.  How I've missed performing *sigh*
It is another reminder all too true Firecracker  
Sven How I wish you could've been there to see hon
Thanks again
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
5 posted 2000-10-24 02:06 PM


hey sis
*hugs*  i know how it feels to play and the strenth and happyness we get from the crowd.  for as you know i to am a proformer.  and i hope one day i can be one again.  a celtic duet mabey my sister?  great work the only thing that would have made it better is if i was there myself to give you a great big huggles.  =)  love you sis.  and as i always say to my fellow musicians.  ROCK ON!!!!     
love you sis
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-10-24 07:32 PM


Thanks my friends  
Jesse I celtic duet would be lovely hon... primeval, fulfilling etc.
It is such a gift to perform and have the crowd love what you sing or play.  The best natural high other than sex!!!  LOL
Glad to sort of share it with you all..
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-10-25 04:01 AM


Isis as I was reading this I could connect so much...made me think of the Christian song...is it well with your Soul...it really is true when the desires from deep within our hearts are surpressed we will not be happy and fulfilled...our beauty needs to shine...to be expressed...it is who we are...our heart and our soul...I really felt this one...James
Isis
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Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-10-26 12:24 PM


James thankyou thankyou thankyou, I'm so glad this 'touched' you it means so much.
*hugs*
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2000-10-26 12:24 PM


James thankyou thankyou thankyou, I'm so glad this 'touched' you it means so much.
*hugs*
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest
10 posted 2000-10-26 08:49 AM


BRAVO ISIS!!!!!!!  This was so neat and gave me so much inspiration, just like it did to you.  That is, in my opinion,  the mark of a great poem.....when the reader can "feel" as though they could have written it themselves, and have felt all it encompasses.  Thanks so much.....and YOU are an inspiration to all of us here!  
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
11 posted 2000-10-26 06:53 PM


Illusion hon thanks, that IS the biggest compliment I can receive you know, that I inspire as well as write poetry.  Thanks hon. So glad you liked it  *hugs*
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


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