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Blood Stains... |
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FJiznit Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24 |
I came up with this a while ago. It's one of my older ones. Still conscious, though powerless I look through his eyes He takes over my being No-one hears my cries But I heard theirs And I watched them die Blood..... Stains..... Inside I felt the twist of evil I knew something had begun I tried, but I couldn't stop it Soon I was overcome Should have ended it myself But it's too late now, he's too strong With this evil tearing through me What will I become? Everything I touch Everything I see Blood stains everything Now he's a part of me Lifeless and blank were her eyes when I left her Her blood stained the floor, the walls and my hands Lying naked and battered beyond recognition This image of horror forever framed in my mind If only she'd left right away when I'd told her If only I'd stayed away from the start If only I'd known that a change was upon me I could have left and she'd still be alive Maybe she died for nothing And it seems I've killed for less This nightmare will never be over If I don't end it myself I leave her now to death and myself to Hell Everything I touch Everything I see Blood stains everything Now he's a part of me Blood..... Stains..... Everything..... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Eeekkk,....what a hauntingly great poem. Oh I like it....like it's darkness....but hoping all is well with the speaker?...take care. *Peace. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This one hit's home kid, I keep this beast of mine under lock and key, Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
You and me both Joel....Very haunting images here. I understand the rage within......Nice work FJ. And do keep those emotions under control....vent here...and often. Hardrock. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i have lost control of my evil and its now part of me and its here to stay. i love this kind of your work the most but all your work is good so keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Holy **** that kicked ass! Need I say more? "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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