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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The fragrance of the night is alive with dead roses come to me my free spirit whoever you may be but beware when the moon is yellow in its darkest hour and the shadows sleep you will be in my power you will see seduction burning in the lantern of my dreams my free spirit in the wind come.. be my eternal love i am the woman you have always searched for let the wind whisper good bye as our silhouettes descend on the cobwebbed wall of eternity A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Definitely an interesting poem... I was pondering the "yellowish" color of the moon just the other night, and associated it with the darkness as well. Interesting the connectiosn you can make from such a revelation. Hope he finds you - words are too precious to be wasted, but never a good substitute for... reality. Christopher |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes never a good substitute for reality..thank you Christopher..nice to hear from you  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Victoria, this is perfect. I wish all that postive magic I sent out had worked, but I think yours will. Love this. Catalinamoon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
well yes i think it will Catalinamoon..you let me know haa... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Victoria...I have to agree with Chris on the word element...they just don't cut it sometimes, or rather, they are simply not enough. my free spirit in the wind come.. be my eternal love These lines are very eloquent...you have a distinctive style I've noticed, it's very graceful. K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good morning Severn..thank you for your nice comments..so glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
this just was incredibly lovely. the line "alive with dead roses" i really liked, as well as the light sensuality of the piece. jann elizabeth |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Jann..so glad you stopped by.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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