Dark Poetry #2 |
it's so easy. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's just so easy to push me away isn't it? so easy for you just to end it because you've decided that you've figured out your feelings locking them away in the vault of your experience so sure that just because you've been able to do this, I can do it too. . . well I can't I can only put my feelings in the background they will always be there for you whether you want them to be or not will they get in the way? maybe but you can't expect me to turn them off just because you have. . . I will try. . . and I will usually be successful but there will be those awkward moments just let me have them then we'll move past them and continue with the relationship that you want us to have. . . detached. . . seperate. . . a friendship. . . but how can you have a friendship without feelings? I don't know. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It is all too confusing isn't it hon? Miss you heaps hon damn icq *big hugs* Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hi there. This I can relate to also. Hasn't been this way recently thankfully, but honestly...(and don't kick me here) I've been the one to do what you've described in the poem. It isn't easy either way. Enjoyed this! ((Hugs)) Hope things get better. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I can certainly relate! Things do eventually get better...waiting for that "perfect" life can always bring hope!....beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, yes it is. . . miss you too. . . Temptress, thanks. . . and no, I won't kick you. . . well, not yet anyway. . . Beth, yes they do. . . and I will find that "perfect" life! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a thin line beween love and hate..sometimes you can get them confused..sometimes when someone hurts you who you love..its easy to hate them for making you love them..if that makes any sense at all haa...heartfelt Sven.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow sven. what a poem. it poses a great question. what is one to do with a heart full of unfulfilled feelings? i have yet to answer myself. great work. kynder "Full is not heavy as empty, not nearly, my love, not nearly...." Fiona Apple |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Relates to the cliche, "I still want to be friends" to be blunt and honest, this kicked major ass! I was right there a year ago. Great work dude!!! Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
IY YIYIYIYIIIII SO HARD HUH...N Y IS IT THAT IT SEEMS SO EASY FOR THE OTHER PERSON..N Y DONT THEY UNDERSTAND HOW HARD IT IS FOR US??? UGH! WISH IT COULD JUST B AS SIMPLE AS INSTANT PUDDING HEHE |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Real feelings of FUSTRATION here. I know these well! Joy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thanks for all of your replies. . . I wish that we could find that line. . . and that it would be as easy as instant pudding. . . but, *sigh*. . . you all know how it is. . . thanks again. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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