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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
why dont you sing to me my favorite song of sympathy you know..the one that helps me sleep a dead man's sleep this is music to die too and memories i make of things we could do if i wa sn t r e ally lo s in g i t i th i nk im re al ly lo sin g i t cant hardly brea the dont wish to breat he the same way yo u breathe i'm on track with being smal/l i can l oo k back and se.e.. isolation never ate the best of m>>>e you d id s o th an k you i ho p e ive made you full i hope i w a s a good enough f o/ol somedaysoon youwillturnmywhimper intomusic a n d il l be pr e t ty torment to your ears as you w e re to m ine all this r/a/g/g/e/d r a p i d w ine will never fill me up,but it will spill for a thousand lives..because i just cant ge t en ou gh.im so afraid ill never get enough "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
brilliant. really. cant do it justice but doesnt mean i wont try... i liked two parts best: somedaysoon youwillturnmywhimper intomusic and: all this r/a/g/g/e/d r a p i d w ine will never fill me up,but it will spill for a thousand lives..because i just cant ge t en ou gh.im so afraid ill never get enough i simply love it. really. it expresses so many different things. i feel connected most of all to the fear of never getting enough... shira |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Well done!!! Writen at a pace I had to slow down to read..... Thanx! Click |
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