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Dark ALONE |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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I stare into a black hole It stares back at me There is nothing there Scary and dark Cut to the bone I am all alone Images of my past Come to haunt They show me signs Of what went wrong Sinister reality of all alone Twisted, beyond hope I scream out No one hears my cry For no one listens Hanging on a cliff all alone Desperation tries it's best But nothing changes I am left here in these chains The ones I chose I am angry and all alone Crimson blood flows Through my heart But no feeling is left It is so cold and dark Because it is all alone I only wish to think To believe It's your turn to be All alone But I watch you go on And on you..... The sun has shone So here I sit Once again Dark and cold Alone |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
My friend, Profound. Such Dark Wisdom and insight. You just captured the essence of my existence and the abyss I have fallen through with the loss of love. I would to print this out and send it to my ex-girlfriend, but I did not write it. bravo, Bravisimo |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sigh - yep. Been there. I empathize. Christopher |
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**Tammy** Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 14 |
I just wanted to say that, that has to be one of the best poems i have ever read in here!! Keep up the good work **Tammy** |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Some familiar feelings you evoke here...yeah! what more can I say! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
a very intense poem...something everyone can relate to. Does Time really heal? Or does it simply breed more hatred and pain.... "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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