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SlyOne Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 16 |
The days we spent together were incredible to say the least by far. The laughs, the smiles, the good times, especially the night at the bar. When we danced, I was in heaven, when you kissed me, Oh I thought I had caught a fallen star. I remember our first kiss like it was yesterday, soft lips, sensuous touch. That was a feeling I didn't want to rush. I saw the look in your eyes as you undressed me, You wanted me as much as I needed you, this I could see. The way it felt when you touched me that night, massaging and caressing my breast. All I could think was Oh GOD, can I handle the rest. You kissed me, put my mind at ease. I wanted to scream Oh God Diane, please please please..... It didn't take long for us both to realize what we wanted to happen that night. Oh God Hunny, you standing there, in front of me, what a beautiful sight. We kissed, our bodies touched, our eyes meet and you could see. I wanted you to make sweet love to me. And so the night passed as we made love to one another for what seemed like hours maybe even days. I laid there, my head and in a total daze. It was unlike any feeling I had experienced before. You had somehow opened that locked door. The door to my heart had been slammed and locked for a very long time night. All I could think was Oh this all feels so right. I cant tell you in mere words how you have made me feel deep within my soul. Its almost like I have climbed out of a deep dark hole. I know it will take some time for this relationship to grow. I am willing to be patient, give you space and take it slow. I want you to know how I feel in my heart as well as my head. I don't want you to think I just want you in my bed. You are so good for me as well as I am for you. I know we can have many days filled with sunshine and skies of blue. |
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SlyOne Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 16 |
Ok, so Im new and am not real sure how this works, but I would like some feed back on this poem....  Thanks all |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woooaahhhhh!!! Racy!  What a beautiful ending! Nice poem |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, its nice to hear someone is in the happy part of a relationship, at least if that was you in the poem..I could feel the excitement of a new love, and the hopes and dreams for the future. Very nice Sandra |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Slyone, and you are, when I saw this poem I first thought, OMG, A novel??? then when I started I couln't stop what a wonderful poem kid, and I'm glad this thing worked out for you, just what a wonderful poem. and when I'm clicking out I glanced over to see this was your first post what a wonderful first post and a HHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLLLing WWWeeeellllcoccooooommmmeeeee really Welcome to Dark Passions, Keep it up kid. hahaha Joel.< !signature--> I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. [This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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SlyOne Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 16 |
Thanks for all the feed back guys.....Glad you liked it.. I will be posting some more soon, let me know what you think.... |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Hi Im new here too, I thought your peom is everything I am looking for but just as scarded to have it as well, Its been a while for me to have those feelings but I can't wait for the excitment. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
How well I remember the beginning of the romance and the endless feelings. What a wonderful experience and excellent poem!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to Passions!! Great first post, reminding us all of new love! But if you decide to write anything racier than this I think it would be better in the adult forum!! LOL  Great work and welcome again I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WOW!! Now this was one heck of a read first thing in the morning!! Great work and WELCOME to Dark Passions!!Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
wow i looked at the length & almost skipped over this 1 but as i skimed over it i had to go back & read it again it was great |
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