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The Lonely Stranger
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

0 posted 2000-10-02 02:32 PM


---I’m So Sorry---
~
You will never know me
Until it’s far too late.
Women you have never met,
Have sealed your grisly fate.
~
I fought the inner voices.
I’ve prayed they leave me be.
But everywhere I look are lovers,
Leaving only me.
~
When you held her hand,
Then gave a warm embrace.
My blood began to boil,
My pulse began to race.
~
My eyes must be so vacant,
Devoid of love or care.
You know you are about to die.
I see it in your stare.
~
I do not even know you,
You’ve never done me wrong.
But hurts of old have drained my heart.
In a muzzle flash, you’re gone!
~
Thank you God,  ‘twas but a dream,
That same old awful one.
I tell myself it’s over now,
As I gaze down at the gun.
~
I wait I pray to God above
That fate soon makes things right.
I pray you never meet me
On that awful summer night.



Some men see things as they are and ask "WHY ?" I see things as they could be and ask "WHY NOT ?"

© Copyright 2000 Gerald H. Monroe - All Rights Reserved
shadydaze
Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85

1 posted 2000-10-02 02:39 PM


whoa man... good poetry. i like it, i like it. write us a few more man.
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-10-02 05:58 PM


Wow!!  Boy oh boy do I know this feeling.  Just watching others can be so damn depressing at times.  You did a wonderful job expressing yourself here.  But HEY, our time will come , time shall prove to be on our side.     
Stay Strong and keep writing,
DKW

P.S.  Thanx for your reply on my poem also.  


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry



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