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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-01 01:07 AM


Welcome to dominion,
What is your wish today?
I hear you ring the old bells,
Meaning you require the same spells,
Sit my friend and enjoy the wait,
My lord, another human has taken the bait.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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shadydaze
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since 2000-10-02
Posts 85

1 posted 2000-10-02 12:48 PM


you are truly demented...

VypEr
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since 2000-09-27
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2 posted 2000-10-02 02:55 AM


I love it! How delightfully sinister! Good job!
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-10-02 07:22 AM


Xeonox, I am a worm for your hook. Loved it.
Btw the prince of darkness loved it too, but said don't give away all our secrets. Shhh.
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

4 posted 2000-10-02 07:59 AM


Haha! What a great piece! I loved it, great writing!
Take Care!


"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


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