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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
This one is a little brighter. With crimson feelings in our heads Amber skies fields of green Our lives are so serene Smells of lavender fall on our face We have stepped out of the rat race Pursued a yellow pace to live in grace as our lives we unlace as we embrace. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God Dorthy on the yellow brick road, but you remember what happend to her when she smelled the flowers!. "Smells of lavender fall on our face" So just beware. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Visions of lovers....shutting out the world....finding each other. Good stuff here Blubrdy....really enjoyed it. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i enjoyed this read. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
This is lovely. I love the use of colors and the flow. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
one and two and breaaaaatheeeeee. yessss thank you blue. you relaxed me. beautiful image. you lightened my mood, thank you!! love ya!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
I just stepped out of the rat race, so I relate to your poem very much, I had to weigh up a good life or money, now I have all the time in the world to smell the ocean breeze. same thing ay! |
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