Dark Poetry #2 |
if only. . . for Isis |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
she takes a long look through the window and in it, she sees glimpses of her life what it could be, what it would be if only. . . if only. . . she feels that this is all there is that there is nothing more if I could only make her see that there is if only. . . if only. . . she looks again and sees nothing but pain she doesn't see the love that she has in her life the love of her child and of her friends and while she still does not have the love she feels she needs, the love she does have could be enough if only. . . if only. . . she sits again by the window and looks out at the world and I look back through the window hoping to reflect back to her the light that she shines to me the light that I know is in her shining for all to see if only. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Not fair hon! In my current state of soul you brought tears to my eyes. It is a sad image I portray through another's eyes. It is beautiful but tragic. Thanks Sven *hugs* Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Whoever said that I play fair Isis? I know how you feel though my friend. . . that's why I'm here. . . *hugs* to you as well. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
*gulp* God now it feels like 'Days Of Our Lives!" LOL Help me I'm drowningggg... LOL Thanks hon.... *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Like sands through the hourglass. . . " LOL Glad that I could bring a smile to your face Isis. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Can't believe no one else had read this. Their loss. Once again this is the perfect depiction of me hon, it has now become 'my anthem'/ Copies of it everywhere. Thanks again, I don't think YOU realise just how well you know and understand me hon, to have written such descriptions having never met is amazing. Thanks my kindred heart, for all, your love, support and understanding. You are a blessing in my life.. *hugs* Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Isis I know that you desire the exact same thing that we all want...to be loved and appreciated by the significant others in our lives...if we don't receive this love we feel disappointment, loneliness, pain, and emptiness. I hope that all the blessings of life will come to you, the happiness you deserve, the appreciation and admiration you need and Love to light up your heart...believe it....James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis. . . as you are to me my kindred. . . we speak the same language you and I. . . you know? James, you hit it right on the head. . . take our lessons and apply them. . . happiness will be yours my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
James thankyou so much you are a sweetie *hugs* And I hope things are still going great guns for you hon. Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Ah this one makes me sad. It reminds me of my marriage (thank goodness it's over). Great writing, Sven. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love this one..it is so true...but sometimes someone needs a special kind of love to feel whole..even when they have all the other loves you mention..sad but true.. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tara, I'm sorry to make you sad. . . but thank you for you comment. . . Victoria, I know. . . but if only that love would come to us. . . and we didn't have to search for it. . . thank you my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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