Dark Poetry #2 |
Sacred Lies |
Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
You hold your bible close to you And sing in Jesus’ name You are nothing but a hypocrite And I know He knows the same And when you are feeling exposed You run to your church to pray… Do you pray for the man you deceived? Or do you beg Him to make your guilt go away? You have taken this mans soul And shoved your God in his face You ripped out his heart And left pain in its place So when you lay your head to sleep After your body’s been pleasured and used, Pray for the heart that you slaughtered Pray for the one you abused. “Only acknowledge your Guilt- you have rebelled against the Lord your God, you have scattered your favors to foreign Gods under every spreading tree, and have not obeyed me” (Jeremiah 3:11) [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 09-26-2000).] |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
fierce to the bone |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Strong poem here Girl Great Job Loved it |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You speak of everyday things, just a million times louder. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I won't go into personal opinions, but I will say I understand much of what you're saying here. Chris |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
yes!!!!! preach on sistah!!!! this is excellent!!! can't wait to read more of your work!! kynder "Full is not heavy as empty, not nearly, my love, not nearly...." Fiona Apple |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A powerful message. 'nuff said Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A great read and like the others said, very strong! |
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