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DeathTrippy
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since 2000-07-15
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WY USA

0 posted 2000-09-26 01:26 AM


Seeking reality
Seeking truth
Run from possibilities
Run to thoughts of you

Frighten me
Frightened of ghosts
Hide from life
Hide from thoughts of you

Pondering your feelings
Pondering your eyes
Hide from all my findings
Hide from all but lies

Ignoring paranoia
Ignoring what I see
Fearing what is in your eyes
Tell me it can't be

Ominous picture of you
Ominous thoughts
Terror of your hate
Do you hate me?

Cowering from your looks
Cowering from your hate
Why look at me when you hate me
Do you hate me?

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since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
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1 posted 2000-09-27 12:37 PM


This is one of those poems where I cannot say enough words to describe how unqiue it is. Great work as always my friend!!

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
2 posted 2000-09-27 12:50 PM


I kept going back to the first four lines. Even now, I will send this, and go back. There is so much caught up in those simple four lines.
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