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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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I caught a glimpse, And I'll remember it forever, Is that all we get? Glipses of our Never Never? Fleeting happiness, All to soon it leaves, Leaves broken hearts and souls, Such pain no one could believe. Is that it then? Only tastes of happiness? Not happiness ever lasting, Just darkness in the abyss. I've asked the questions before, And I've no doubt I will again, Just airing them here publicly, Somehow lessens the pain. Touched by angels, friends and love, Touched by the goodness from above, Now the pure cream coloured dove, Isn't so clean anymore...... I want more than glimpses in my life.... *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You never fail to give me a glimpse in your poetic talent. I loved this two lines. Now the pure cream coloured dove, Isn't so clean anymore...... Great job!!! Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
wow babe *hugs* this one is good. i like you have had a glimpse of happyness. you know what i mean. and i hope that one day we can both have not just a glimpse, but a lifetime of love and happyness. and as long as you have me you will always have that love and happyness that we both crave. great work babe. *kiss* love ya sis jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow Isis, I do love this one. Perhaps because just now I can relate to alot of the feelings. That first verse really grabed me! Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Very good job, interesting thoughts. I think that life is a long search for little crumbs of happyness, you can't really be happy all the time, otherwise you won't be able to differ those moments of pure joy. I liked this a lot, take care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I know no-one can be happy all the time!!!  But looking at it clinically is life really only 'glimpses' of happiness???Thanks for reading  Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Don't we all Isis...don't we all...I believe that I have caught more than a glimpse of my happiness...I believe that I am starting to live my dream...more later within the lines of my writing...James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well if you have James, hang onto it, fight for it and never let it go!! Smarty I'll read between your lines, I usually do don't I? LOL Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Take a longer look my friend. . . I think that you'll find more than you know. . . Wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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