Dark Poetry #2 |
Under The Night Sky |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Tender dreams locked in my mind, of a curious nature, a curious kind. We two, holding hands, in a spot we find, for slow dancing, under the night sky. Tired of being told what to do, when to do it, do it with who. When all I really want is you, slow dancing, under the night sky. Can't bear the fear anymore, anticipating, the slam of the door. Want to free up my soul, for a little more, slow dancing, under the night sky. If in the morning I should die, tell all who ask, the reason why, was so forever, I could try slow dancing, under the night sky. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great ending. This does not belong in dark passions. j/k. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
I disagree. If in the morning i should die..seems depressing enough for dp. I think this is a well-crafted, heartfelt piece. I especially like.. in a spot we find. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Great Job very heartfelt I agree Blue |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you all. @}~~>~~~~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
This is great, I loved it. The title really caught my attention, love the night sky... and slow dancing Good job! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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