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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
do your thing I know you work alot and don't seem to have too much time for me and sometimes I worry about that but I know I should just let you be. Because you're just doing your thing and I like the things you do and the favorite part I like is the thing between me and you. It's so nice when you make some time for me it creates a lovely day. The sun shines bright and I find myself feeling right as all my dreams come true. So do your thing and I'll do mine and we'll get together from time to time and perhaps this thing we do will grow into something special for all we know. Jameslee@September24,2000 |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
this is nice...well spoken and a good outlook on the situation.... |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Good Job LM with a positive outlook keep up the good work Blue |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
This is a very good way to look at it, and what's most important is when she's not doing that work thang she's doing that you thang with you. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice, powerful wording. I liked this one a lot! |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Nice! Do your thing and I'll do mine and we'll get together from time to time  I just loved it, in relationship you should leave some freedom for your partner, great writing James, as usual I loved it! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Patience my friend, patience. A woman always appreciates this and know you have a great deal of patience James. Another wonderful write James. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you giam, blue, Rosebud, fracta, LM and Marina for the nice comments... Right Rosebud I should look at the positive side of this....gimme that thang... Oh dear Marina one of my very obvious weak points is a lack of patience...I want everything and I want it yesterday... hard for me to go one step at a time I want to go for the gusto...but of course new opportunities to improve your weak areas surface daily until you learn to get it right...I am working on this...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wondering what kind of favorite thing you have to do...... "and the favorite part I like is the thing between me and you." have read a few poems from your hand now, and I love the way you translate words into an illustration without pictures. looking forward to see more from you Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James, she is on your mind all the time, I can see. I think you deserve a lot of her time. I feel myself, that I only receive crumbs, rather than a meal, and it hurts. Good luck, and write on. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very sweet James.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Charisma, Sandra, and Victoria for the nice comments. Charisma without giving too much away the thing I love to do is caressing.. Sandra I love Mina but I can't stay with a woman too long unles I feel needed and yes that requires her giving me some of her time...James |
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