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0 posted 2000-09-21 02:39 PM



Hell is on earth,
For I  fear no man,
Pain is a word that heals my wounds,
Resistance in life I must accept,
If I choose to immerse in the pools of heaven,
Cycle of lost hope is repeating itself,
I am a puppet hanging on my threads,
Threads of hopes and sanity let loose themselves,

I fill suicidal once more,
Wishing for such thoughts to vanish,
Why must I not abandon what is not mine to begin with?
I sit at the same place hoping for some relief,
Death seems so much appealing this time around,

A play has been played in which she(sister) plays a wonderful role,
Drama of life passes itself on the stage,
Audiences are dumbfounded,
For only the writer knows the truth,
Not sharing the pain he confides within his soul,

These thoughts rush like a raging bull,
Tending to his will, he must free himself,
Like a stone that does not bleed,
He must not give in,
For this end is the eternity.


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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bluebrdy65
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Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-22 06:38 AM


I have read your poem about three maybe four times in the last two days
it has alot of emotion
I think I understand theplay and the role and the audience not seeing what the writer knows
There is really so much emotion here I dont know what to say but I like this piece you have written
so keep up the good work
and hang in there Baby
Bluebrdy

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2 posted 2000-09-22 02:41 PM


thank you bluebrdy. The poem is about my life and about how I feel sometimes. Thank you for your response.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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