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A Letter To God |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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Dear God, I have been hurt in many ways that the one thing I long for is just some happy days. The pain is hurting more & more. And I have this inner feeling that the devil may soon score. I dont like to feel like this and maybe with your help this pain will be set free. It is so hard for me, to change to the way I wish to be. All I am asking for, is just a little love. I want you to guide me, onto the chosen path from above. Sincerely A growing pain< !signature--> *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
very nice Erin....the only way to true happiness is from above...i have strayed..but you keep asking...he gives what we need when we need it...i really liked your poem..i need to remember in my search what is important...Greg |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Nicely done Erin.. Just like Greg I have left the path that you follow, and have given up. Never give up everything works out when you look up to the sky. Michell |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This poem wasnt actually my point of view. I was trying to write it coming from a friends point of view that is having a hard time right now. Thank you's both very much for the replies. *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have experienced this cycle of pain and it is a struggle to let go of the pain and the sadness and reach out for happiness, to desire it, to want it more than anything in this world, and it does come as we redirect our thoughts and desires and as we embrace it...James |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow, Erin, how is it that we never met, but have such similiar thoughts? Its kinda scary. This was another great 1  keep smiling & keep writin LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thank you's both for reading my work. It really means alot to me. Elmo~~~I dont know what to tell you, but great minds think alike!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sigh* Good writing ERIN Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
God not only listens to your prayers, He answers them. beautiful prayer. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey! This is really nice... sometimes you just don't really know what else to do but pray to God he'll send you a little love... I think he's pretty tired of my chattering already If he heard me...Hope everything's alright or better with your sis and everything. Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey! This is really nice... sometimes you just don't really know what else to do but pray to God he'll send you a little love... I think he's pretty tired of my chattering already If he heard me...Hope everything's alright or better with your sis and everything. Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thank you all for replying to my poem. I didnt think it was all that good. You all really brightened up my day.  *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is a really good job, ERIN. We all need a prayer to God everyone now and then. --Little Girl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Very well expressed. I often write letters to God like this in my prayers...eventually He does answer them, in His own time, in His own way Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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