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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-09-19 11:04 PM


SEEKING

When your lonely
Longing into the far away
Desperately seeking

It is like the  roar of the sea
You try and grasp it's great power
You hear it's majesty
But cannot reach into it

Too many words that you cannot say
And there is a lose for any sound to utter
Seeking higher   ground to stand on
Floundering all the way,  you miserably  fail

Desparaging failure  brings on the cold damp
The darkness ingrained in your soul
You have drowned to a bitter depth
Into a sea so great, that won't set free

The very sea you tried to conquer
Overtook your living soul
Seeking your saving breath
No one can save you now

Even while you seek
You  finally drown


[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 09-19-2000).]

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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-19 11:33 PM


Awl this is sad Yet holds alot of truth
great work
Blue

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