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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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I have no pain and I'm not insane and I'm happy again I no longer feel your pain and that taste is gone that you left in my mouth and i'm no fool to what your doing it's just a game you think lovers like to play now the blood pours from your veins... Julie :) |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Good write....Games,games,and more games....Must we all play?? Thank you!! Click |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Don't you just love turning the game around on a master in the final move and ruining "their" game for them? Wonderful write my friend. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice expressions...James |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Games, everyone plays them, its when ya get hurt ya realize.. Very Nice, I liked the way you expressed everything. Birdee "So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71 |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Even though us true romantics never want to see anyone hurt...when they hurt us then we see them feel the same pain...Oh well...nice poem....Greg |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow I liked this one!!!I like the way you formated it too. Everyone plays the game, but alot dont win. And its just to bad that it works out that way. Doesnt sound like much fun to me.< !signature--> *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-18-2000).] |
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