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eegood
Junior Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 2000-09-15 06:34 PM

When diamonds never sparkle,
And flowers cease to grow;
When thunder doesn't echo,
And rivers fail to flow;

When hearts no longer wonder,
And hands are never held;
When smiles are only memories,
And hope is never felt;

When trees no longer blossom,
And stars refuse to rise;
When autumn has no falling leaves,
And winter never dies;

When time has no tomorrows,
And rainbows have no hue;
When God, alone, commands me,
Then I'll stop loving you...

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-15 06:42 PM

eegood~~~Amazing!!!I am speechless. This was perfect. I loved every word of it!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

2 posted 2000-09-15 06:43 PM

yes yes yes!
this is what love should sound like!!
wonderful again!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-09-15 07:27 PM

And once again you did it! that's exactly how I feel... this made me cry... so beautiful. You don't mind is I save this one too, right?

Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

4 posted 2000-09-16 09:10 AM

Ohhhh... such a heartfelt poem!!

Terrific!! Loved every word... every sentence

Take care.

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

5 posted 2000-09-16 11:45 AM

do we control our feelings??? or is it destiny? we never know unless we go with the flow....great poem...I liked it....

Julie :)

Click
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 202
USA

6 posted 2000-09-16 12:58 PM

What a promise!!! One that is hard to keep!! Good luck...I believe you can.
Thank you!! Good poem!!!!

Click

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

7 posted 2000-09-16 05:38 PM

Wow, this is great..I love this
Very powerful poem...

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