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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Souless machine That damn blue glare Aborting my need Rendering me shapeless Vilifying my existence Appease if you please That part of me still alive Inside I still survive Outside the shell Nothing remains © 9/15/00 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Jonas, Are you sure nothing remains seems like there's some pretty powerful stuff in there, coming out through this piece. Great writing. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you Kethry. There is substance remaining, I just feel like a secondary consideration at times. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
this is good....to be so close to someone you feel a part of them....empty whne they are gone...at least that is what I got out of it.....i liked it!!!  Julie :) |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you JulieAnn. You've heard of "football season widows"? I think I am an "internet widower". LOL! |
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