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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
I posted this in one room but i want to post it here Lucky is what you think when you hear about this girl she has everything she could possibly want but yet doesnt go and flaunt Is it the hurt she has inside that she cant possibly deny her life is great yeah its true than why everyday does she feel blue she has no more tears she'll end it all right here no one understands just how she feels its a feeling she has that just says kill would anyone miss her or even care she thinks to herself no who would and ends it all right here for good Please reply bye 4 now Silent |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow uuummm,....*sigh*....this poem is so sad in it's truth. Not that nobody would care because that is all wrong...so many people the girl doesn't even realize would hurt to see this happen. I meant truth as to I have known girls that I have thought were so "Lucky" and seemed like they had it all....but inside they were hurting...and just wearing a mask for everyone else. This poem has got me thinking. I truly hope whoever this person the speaker is speaking about can see sunshine and find a way out of her darkness. Please take care. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I've seen this girl so many times.....trying to live up to expectations set by society, family, the school, all those around her. And yet no one knows the anguish, the pain, the insecurities inside.....till the only avenue of escape is eternal darkness. To all of these I extend my wings....let me embrace you in the folds, shielding you from all, till you are strong enough to emerge and take your place in the world once more. You have entered the realm of angels here in Dark Passions....we will protect you. Amazing what a few words on a computer screen can bring forth from those who read them, isn't it? This poem brought forth some honest emotions within me.....I am here for all. |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Why thanks for replying bye 4 now Silent |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes Silent Soul, this girl ?? it's just to close to home for me right now, I might post a poem on her, she didn't make it. It was to much for her. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
what? joel |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes sometimes it is to much for anyone to deal with alone sometimes we all need a friend. well good writing and good luck. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
A very good poem indeed... sad and final. Very touching. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
good peom and like hardlock said honest words bring out something in us... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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