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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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darkness falls inside my mind i seem to leave the world behind all colours fade and smiles turn down my good times ghosts to haunt me my face a mask life a task no one can save me as i fall and darkness falls around me |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
tight piece, Allan..moody, brooding..lovely! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Oh Allan, this poem seems like it is shouting... if that is the correct way to describe it! I know the feeling of falling into the black abyss. I hope you are okay. Do take care.  ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i have to say that to me this poem isnt shouting...its quiet. whispering... silently begging and hoping to be saved by someone or something at the last moment. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Allan, sad, haunting, beautiful. Are you OK, though? I suppose not. Lots of (((hugs))) ! < !signature-->Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo [This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 09-09-2000).] |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Wow...great poem...I've felt that way so often... Dark Star |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
thanks all.. The depression has lifted a little for now... it seems to be happening more and more frequently and my resistance is growing weaker... this was my response to that and to the poem 'Depression' by Lil OnE |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Allan *hugs* banish that depression hon.. it only seeks to harm. A simple piece that speaks volumes and something in it reminds the reader how it feels 'to drown in misery and darkness'. Well done *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Alan, I hope you feel much better soon. This was quite a powerful and accurate depiction of that feeling, when you can't quite climb out of the hole. You take care, and keep writing. Sandra |
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