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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-09-08 01:37 PM



The breath of midnight winds
echo in the starlight
within the canyon walls
and deserts in the night

The lover she longed for
at last hers to  keep
deep within the canyon
eternal dusts  sweep

In  the cool..dark
Arizona skies
phantom dust swirls
two lovers.. become
a natural wonder
in disquise

And in the depths
of dreams  fulfilled
if you listen very close
you may hear  gasping
ot their voices
as mystic winds blow

Embraced by the wind
ecstasy of voices cry
two spirits making love
deep eternal sighs

at last she has her love
a dream now come true
never to say good bye
within the Grand Canyon
and Colorado River skies


© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
LM
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since 2000-08-03
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1 posted 2000-09-08 04:51 PM


Wow... never thought about making love in the canyon... interesting place  
Hehe... very beautiful, enjoyed reading it!

"Did I ask too much?
More than a lot
You gave me nothing
Now it's all I got..."
U2/One

pegasus111
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ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-09-08 08:09 PM


like making love at the beach except no water.. ..this was great!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Victoria
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3 posted 2000-09-08 09:33 PM


Thank you LM and Pegasus for stopping by.  
Apreciate your nice comments.

taramw
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4 posted 2000-09-09 12:17 PM


Loved this poem of your Victoria!    Very sweet  

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Victoria
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5 posted 2000-09-09 12:02 PM


Thank you tara..I am happy you liked it  
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