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pegasus111
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ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2000-09-08 08:52 AM


Thou hast wept bitter tears in dark places,
even unto thou, vile demons have torn thy flesh,
tortured thee with the uncertainty of thy worth,
evil thought doth crawl in the slime of despair,
drawing thou deeper into the pain of thyself,
thy noiseless screams into the blackness,
unheard, unheaded, by the enemy of truth,
lies of faceless antagonists deny thee hope.

Turn thy face upward, away from thy fear,
seek sanctuary in a power beyond thy scope,
for, even from this blackest of all pits,
foul with the stench of deceived hearts,
suffocating with the mass of agonized humanity,
thy spirit shall rise again out of the darkness,
into the saving light to be reborn again,
for thy spirit is immortal unto eternity.

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for those of us who share the agony of the pit.


the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-09-08 11:10 AM


t'was almost biblical. Nicely written  
LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-08 12:12 PM


Oh... Cool, I really dig this style! Great writing and the message is very wise.
Take Care!

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2000-09-08 08:11 PM


Victoria..thank you and bless you.amen  

LM..Diggin' you diggin' it..lol

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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