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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-07 06:20 PM


The dark prowls,
Through my heart and soul,
Slowly darkering,
My life a void,
Or leaving a void,
In my life,
Unable to fight,
I feel myself weeken,
In emotional strengh,
It becomes hard,
To hold on,
A little longer.


What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

© Copyright 2000 Moon Dust - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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1 posted 2000-09-07 08:39 PM


Maria..hang in there, love..it really does get better..peace

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

darkstar
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2 posted 2000-09-07 08:49 PM


Keep holding on....I liked it...

Dark Star

taramw
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3 posted 2000-09-08 02:46 AM


Hmm... sometimes it feels as if you just can't hold on one minute more... but then something comes along to make you gallop off again... till next time    Do hold on... I want to see more of your poems!    Take care.
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Virgin Suïcide
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4 posted 2000-09-08 07:05 AM


I'll just go with darkstar!

love, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

Moon Dust
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5 posted 2000-09-08 04:18 PM


pegasus - you read my mind

Darkstar and virgin suicide - Yeah and I will
this poem was a sort of update to another poem of  mine. Called just a little longer on the main site.

Tara thanks, means a lot



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