Dark Poetry #2 |
A Little Longer |
Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
The dark prowls, Through my heart and soul, Slowly darkering, My life a void, Or leaving a void, In my life, Unable to fight, I feel myself weeken, In emotional strengh, It becomes hard, To hold on, A little longer. What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Maria..hang in there, love..it really does get better..peace the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Keep holding on....I liked it... Dark Star |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... sometimes it feels as if you just can't hold on one minute more... but then something comes along to make you gallop off again... till next time Do hold on... I want to see more of your poems! Take care. ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
I'll just go with darkstar! love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
pegasus - you read my mind Darkstar and virgin suicide - Yeah and I will this poem was a sort of update to another poem of mine. Called just a little longer on the main site. Tara thanks, means a lot What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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