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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Listen Stroke her hair I love it there Beautiful eyes They tell no lies Her smile so bright Just filled with delight Smooth, smooth skin Legs nice and thin A kiss on the neck Hey, what the heck Caress her back You’ve got the knack Talk for a while She’s just your style What to do? She obviously likes you Just listen! "Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
So deep that one almost misses the twist in the last line. Listen!! Nice poem brings a smile. Deepak |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
great Job I like the ending too but I stroke him |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wonderful poem boardman...  "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alright I can listen but when I went to the movies with Mina I couldn't stop myself from rubbing her soft silky legs and I did ask her if it was alright and she said go for it...and I did listen...James |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
welcome boardman...nice piece..a bit erotic and sweet on the palate.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi everyone, I just wanted to say thanks for all the replies. You guy's are really great! Vince |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Some rather interesting points about ralationships! |
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