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why do people walk in the sky?
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why do people walk in the sky? |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
to walk the skies gravity my pursuer (or is it my shadow?) words echoing in my mind you can run my dear but you can't hide fear of falling down down down in the realization that i already have. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i cant exactly say what the message is here you are putting across, but ive put my own meaning to it...and i like this alot!! it just hit the right spot tonight! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey there,...first let me say that I am so diggin' the title. That in itself could be a poem. As for the rest,...well, it definately gets the gears moving and keeps them moving. A thinker. A well written thinker. Yeah, that's it. Take care. Oh and thanks for the question to ponder on. *Peace. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i like your writing style very much. and agree that the title is excellent. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow... I sure have to think about it... "You can run my dear, but you can not hide!!!" WHHhhhhoooooohhooooo.....  Cool writing... Shira, where do you live in Israel? |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
the title is not really to my credit. it is from an anonymous email my friend got . thats all it said. she told me about it. and it got me thinking. why do people walk in the sky? seemed like a beautiful thought to me with so much depth... LM, i live in jerusalem. thank you all for your replies...they mean a lot to me shira |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
beautifully simplistic and mysterious. Sometimes the best poems are the ones that only make the best sense to you. -Jes |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
shira, you are becoming a feeling factory relentlessly churning out emotions encapsulated in words of pain and beauty. it may be located within, but all of your readers delight to breathe in its intoxicating fumes. one day though, i hope that maybe you can fire the bellows with thoughts of happiness rather than purely-burning sadness. a sweet poem of self-analysis josh. |
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