Dark Poetry #2 |
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Denial |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia ![]() |
They say silence is golden But we were taught That everything that glitters Will soon fade And that voice without sound Becomes lacklustre, barren And those hidden truths Begin to decay, spoil Leaving a lingering sickness inside I once thought I had a place to hide Within my nothingness My silent void Then the noise began deep in my heart Forcing me to awaken From my emotional slumber And I began screaming out My treasured secrets But your ears so tender and frail Were deafened by my flooding vigil So again, I had to find silence To save you To save me But I lost my empty refuge within Discovering that all this time My hollow was filled With swarming desires I just chose to be blind And the only thing more lonely than nothingness Is denial. |
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Nikolette Sadness![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
And the only thing more lonely than nothingness Is denial i really love this ending! great poem! Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
You hit the nail on the head there! Tremendous! ![]() "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Thank you both for the responses! its good to know that you understand the feeling im talking about...im not alone! ![]() ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
But I lost my empty refuge within Sometimes things overshadow or obscure our inner places of peace but they are always there when we need them. And the only thing more lonely than nothingness Is denial. Dawn this was a truely intense and powerful read, I feel so much pain and yearning in your words. Take care my friend and be well. Excellently written piece. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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