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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-02 03:06 AM



They say silence is golden
But we were taught
That everything that glitters
Will soon fade
And that voice without sound
Becomes lacklustre, barren
And those hidden truths
Begin to decay, spoil
Leaving a lingering sickness inside
I once thought I had a place to hide
Within my nothingness
My silent void
Then the noise began deep in my heart
Forcing me to awaken
From my emotional slumber
And I began screaming out
My treasured secrets
But your ears so tender and frail
Were deafened  by my flooding vigil
So again, I had to find silence
To save you
To save me
But I lost my empty refuge within
Discovering that all this time
My hollow was filled
With swarming desires
I just chose to be blind
And the only thing more lonely than nothingness
Is denial.

© Copyright 2000 Dawn van Krieken - All Rights Reserved
Nikolette Sadness
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port richey fl.
1 posted 2000-09-02 03:52 AM


And the only thing more lonely than nothingness
Is denial
i really love this ending!
great poem!

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-09-02 04:09 AM


You hit the nail on the head there! Tremendous!  

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
3 posted 2000-09-02 04:54 AM


Thank you both for the responses!
its good to know that you understand the feeling im talking about...im not alone!

~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
4 posted 2000-09-02 12:58 PM


But I lost my empty refuge within

Sometimes things overshadow or obscure our inner places of peace but they are always there when we need them.

And the only thing more lonely than nothingness
Is denial.


Dawn this was a truely intense and powerful read, I feel so much pain and yearning in your words. Take care my friend and be well.
Excellently written piece.


"I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy

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